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with a swirl,
a simple twirl of a fingertips motion,
spills an emotion,
where ink holds the link,
of a girl who's smile,
came from a boy, far further than a mile,

at the top of every page,
she spends her days,
forming words wings,
to fly to the boys heart,
giving him reason to laugh,

her sketches reveal,
the boy has the power to heal,
the heartache to her past,
both knowing this friendship will definately last,

despite the distance,
they found each other in need of assistance,
they saw their hearts ink the pain,
onto papers lost translation,
together they twirled their emotions,

the boy who twirled constantly with a pencil,
found a girl who skecthed feircely on stencils,
together they twirled,
into a dance the world could never understand,
lost in a tune only they understood <3
okay this is for my valentine, you know who you are :3
i hope you enjoy it!!
love lots found-girl
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123t7 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Zoe.... I love this :D
I wish i had read it sooner D:... you know you have an amazing way with words... your the only person that i will happily read everything that you post :3
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
im glad you liked it!!
lol im not that good, but im learning :)...:tighthug: thanks david!
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123t7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What are you talking about?.... your amazing :)... better then i could ever wish to be ^^"
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found-girl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: you have skills david!
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123t7 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have a different kind of skill... unfortunatly i can't write like this D:... but i can draw .... so i should be happy with that :3
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found-girl Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
exactly! oh i liked your drawing btw! it was awesome! i forgot to favourite it!
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123t7 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahah you don't have to favourite it... thank you anyway :3
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found-girl Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:P haha okay!
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dancingpickles22 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012   Writer
This is...perfect! No other word would suit this poem better, this is all the embodiment of what love is. It is pain, it is happiness, it is finding another person not to be "the perfect one" but finding another who understand you and loves it. Blissfully aware of it being Valentine's Day this spoke to me and broke through the distress I went through on this "day of love" Thank you. For being a writer, for following dreams, for allowing the world the passage for your work to be read. Vivid and beautiful it is, simply amazed I am! You are a very talented writer, continue on!
-Pickles
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: t-thank you, it means alot to me everyone is drawing so much from this!
-xx found-girl
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dancingpickles22 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012   Writer
there's a lot to draw from :)
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it still surprises me so thank you!
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dancingpickles22 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012   Writer
lol yw (:
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Kingpencil Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is your best! It's lighthearted and full of such joyful emotions. The rhyme you had was brilliant and beautiful. I almost cried reading this; I still feel the tears! This is truly beautiful!
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
im so glad you loved it!! i cant believe the response im getting from this!!
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Kingpencil Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ya should! It's amazing! I read it three times and all three times I felt like I was going to cry!
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha good tears right?
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Kingpencil Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course!
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just checking :P
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Kingpencil Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am actually planning on printing it out and putting it in one of my binders so I can see it always.
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thats a cool idea, imma steal that and do the same!
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sailortrance Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well, I am definitely not your valentine- but I did really enjoy this. There was a lot of emotion, but you kept the feeling light- and though you chose free verse as your style, the rhymes added a nice feeling of rhythm, whimsy and charm- which brought a smile to my face. I especially liked the imagery of writing wings with words- which, we who write- and draw know to be the truth of how we fallen people can be angels in our own particular ways. Ill be keeping an eye on your writings- because if they're anything like this, I know I'll enjoy them.
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found-girl Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: my valentines just a good friend :) im glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much :glomp:
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